A mainly proficient response but at times you generalise. Your points about social network sites.
To strengthen:
To strengthen:
1) Age demographic of your audience. Potentially 15-20 year olds because this age group can identify with the age of the characters involved in the action.
2) 2) You say modern day problems of murder and so on. Provide examples. Google recent murders in the UK. For example this website may give you concrete examples and evidence of research: http://www.citizensreportuk.org/reports/murders-fatal-violence-uk.html
3) Re ethnicity of your potential audience. You need to emphasise that your primary audience would be white British because this reflects the ethnicity of the characters on the screen.
4) Also you film may appeal to a local audience because the film is shot in Norwich and its suburbs. The bells of St Peter Mancroft Church (you could include images of the church and of Gentleman’s Walk) can be heard in the first flashback.
5) Explain more clearly the link to the film “Se7en”. Remember point, evidence, discuss.
6) Your last sentence you say......our film is not a high budget.... Instead as our film is not a high budge film with A list actors social network sites are therefore an outlet where we could potentially reach the largest audience.
A mainly proficient response but at times you generalise. Your points about social network sites.
ReplyDeleteTo strengthen:
To strengthen:
1) Age demographic of your audience. Potentially 15-20 year olds because this age group can identify with the age of the characters involved in the action.
2) 2) You say modern day problems of murder and so on. Provide examples. Google recent murders in the UK. For example this website may give you concrete examples and evidence of research: http://www.citizensreportuk.org/reports/murders-fatal-violence-uk.html
3) Re ethnicity of your potential audience. You need to emphasise that your primary audience would be white British because this reflects the ethnicity of the characters on the screen.
4) Also you film may appeal to a local audience because the film is shot in Norwich and its suburbs. The bells of St Peter Mancroft Church (you could include images of the church and of Gentleman’s Walk) can be heard in the first flashback.
5) Explain more clearly the link to the film “Se7en”. Remember point, evidence, discuss.
6) Your last sentence you say......our film is not a high budget....
Instead as our film is not a high budge film with A list actors social network sites are therefore an outlet where we could potentially reach the largest audience.