A detailed and thoughtful response where your proficiently identify the production's potential appeal.
To strengthen:
1) You say……..Michael sees and also the slow reveal of the victim in the cliff hanger….. This doesn’t make sense Tom. Instead the panning shot which lingers on the girls hand as it appears out of the body bag . It is clear the girl is alive thus increasing tension and curiosity and the possibility the girl may escape. Think about The Bride’s miraculous escape from being buried alive in Kill Bill 2. 2) You say….enforces the grit……instead the lighting reinforces the realism of the film and thus potentially position the audience with the victim. 3) 3) Intertextuality…..re “Se7en” I suggest you say something like, the representation of our grave digger Michael strongly suggests the psychopathic nature of John Doe. 4) 4) Cliff hanger …..A little muddled – focus on what the audiences will be wishing for, that the victim in the body bag may escape. The identity of the victim seems to closely link to the girl in the flashbacks, I suggest Tom you leave the plot twist out.
A detailed and thoughtful response where your proficiently identify the production's potential appeal.
ReplyDeleteTo strengthen:
1) You say……..Michael sees and also the slow reveal of the victim in the cliff hanger….. This doesn’t make sense Tom. Instead the panning shot which lingers on the girls hand as it appears out of the body bag . It is clear the girl is alive thus increasing tension and curiosity and the possibility the girl may escape. Think about The Bride’s miraculous escape from being buried alive in Kill Bill 2.
2) You say….enforces the grit……instead the lighting reinforces the realism of the film and thus potentially position the audience with the victim.
3) 3) Intertextuality…..re “Se7en” I suggest you say something like, the representation of our grave digger Michael strongly suggests the psychopathic nature of John Doe.
4) 4) Cliff hanger …..A little muddled – focus on what the audiences will be wishing for, that the victim in the body bag may escape. The identity of the victim seems to closely link to the girl in the flashbacks, I suggest Tom you leave the plot twist out.